Got a heads-up today from an editor that one of the pizza shops it schedules now wants timing in hours, minutes and seconds. Used to be 4:12 p.m. was good enough. Now, it is 4:12:36. Fortunately, I had my notes so I was OK. The questionnaire and guidelines don't mention the change in the timing procedure. An update would be helpful.
I, too, find it best to be complete in my ACL narrative. Hit all the "nos" but write in a tight, conversational style. "Dave asked which sauce I would like. He took a ladle full and carefully poured it in the center of the pizza dough. He then used the back of the ladle to spread it evenly to the rim of the dough. He then looked at me while pointing to the cheeses and asked, "Would you like mozzarella or maybe you want to try a combination of our other five cheeses." ....
Shopping SoCal and Maui.