I would like to return this article back to the original blogger for the following grammatical and spelling corrections as noted in the article listed in acemysteryshoppers.com:
<"Returning shops big production, bigger than just approving a project and sending it on through to the client."> There seems to be a verb missing between the words "shops" and "big".
<..."your next move should be to check your e-mail because the shop is’t over yet."> Please correct the missspelling of the word "isn't" in your sentence.
<"The process of returning the shop to a shopper includes writing an email detailing exactly what may be missing or not adds up. "> The grammatical ending of the sentence needs to be re-written, prehaps to something such as "does not add up".
<"Editors my attempt to call you before returning for something such as this, "> I believe this should be corrected to say: "Editors MAY attempt to call..."
<"Not complaining."> This is not a complete and correctly worded sentence.
<"Incomplete narratives are on part with a carpenter building your house, but leaving you with the shingles and nails to finish up the roof."> The CORRECT phrase would be: "are on PAR with a carpenter..." NOT "part" as in this sentence.
<"ACE editors want to hear from you. ">.....OK, so you have heard from me....overall,
interesting and thorough information. Overall grade is: 4.
Thank you and have a lovely day!!
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Just a note to say that as of 7/2/14, Jesse went back and actually made the revisions
suggested here! Way to go, Jesse, and much appreciated! Have "upped" your grade to: 10!!
Edited 4 time(s). Last edit at 07/03/2014 12:27AM by guysmom.