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That article lacked one important element; the thesis.

I had no idea what point the author was trying to make. At first, I thought it was "be concise" (which I agree with), but then he started blabbering about other things. It lacked focus.
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Nichtoliver Wrote:
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> That article lacked one important element; the
> thesis.
>
> I had no idea what point the author was trying to
> make. At first, I thought it was "be concise"
> (which I agree with), but then he started
> blabbering about other things. It lacked focus.


Okay. I enjoyed the article. :-)
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should strunk and white be replaced?
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