Need help with a company

I am trying to get on with a company, and when I am completing my app, the section that you have to complete telling about your most recent shopping experince good or bad, I can't seem to get them to accept it. Can someone PM me with help with a shopping experience. I know this is a crazy question but it is driving me up the wall.

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Keep it short, sweet and descriptive. The one I use includes a greet, an observation of cleanliness and neatness, one interaction, time in line, cashier interaction, and the parting remark. How you say it and your punct./grammar/spelling is more important than what you say. Make sure you include names.

Edited to add-If it's a dining experience, you need to be more detailed than with a retail experience. smiling smiley

Joan
Independent Scheduler


Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 02/15/2009 04:55PM by JoanG.
Joan gave you good advice. It's also good to have a couple of different types, say one for companies that do more dining, and another for companies that do more banking, and then the standard one for all the rest, if ya get my drift.

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“Lying in bed would be an altogether perfect and supreme experience if only one had a colored pencil long enough to draw on the ceiling."
~Gilbert K. Chesterton
Many times it's easier to fabricate an experience for the writing samples. Just remember that it's mainly to see how you write. A friend of mine just sent me a narrative sample she recently received from a potential shopper. It was unbelievably bad and filled with spelling errors, punct. errors (when there was punct.lol, etc.
Keep all your proofed samples together so you can paste in an appropriate one when needed on an app.

Joan
Independent Scheduler
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