Sorry Elton, after reading what the editor wrote you, I have to agree that your report must have posed some difficulties. You may have unwittingly repeated some phrases from the sample survey, but if so, it's still a problem for them. And common sense should have told you to stay in a single verb tense. Either stuff is happening now, or it already happened.
However, I do chortle as I read this person describing themself as a "Quality Editor." Has BestMark "Quantity Editors" as well? If not, perhaps they need to hire some Redundancy Editors.
The $4.50 amount does sound picayune at first glance. But I can imagine the editor toting up 50 cents per sentence or such, according to guidelines given them from which they are not permitted to deviate. Could be.
I've only done one of these. I received no deductions. The $17 fee was not much, given the report, but it's what I agreed to and what I got. So I thought it was fair.
eltonj Wrote:
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> Okay. I received an e-mail outling what alleged
> wrongs I did. Here is the exact text. See what
> eveybody thinks.
>
> I am a Quality Editor at BestMark, and I have just
> completed editing your recent report. Thank you
> for taking the time to perform this shop and
> complete the survey form. Unfortunately, I have
> to inform you that a deduction will be made from
> your payment for this shop.
>
>
>
> The reason for the $4.50 deduction is that your
> narrative was not thorough or detailed enough and
> required substantial additions/enhancements via
> email, plus much of the narrative that you
> original had included a lot of wording from the
> survey questions and had to be rewritten before
> sending to the client.
>
>
>
> Your survey was not thorough. On these surveys,
> please be sure to include enough information to
> justify the scores that your gave. There are
> often two or more questions/scores that need to be
> justified in the narrative block. Your commentary
> can include facts and feelings about the POSITIVE
> and the NEGATIVE aspects of your shop. The
> narrative should include both the facts of what
> happened, in story format, and what was said by
> the associate (and sometimes you, depending on the
> survey question). Include the greeting and
> closing statements of any employee you evaluate.
> EVERY score that is not top block must be
> addressed in the narrative. Please look at the
> sample survey before performing the shop to see
> how much narrative we expect and for the tone of
> each type of survey.
>
>
>
> Interactions between you and the associate are
> best provided in your own words and must reflect
> the unique interaction during that shop. Please
> do not just use examples or wording from the
> survey itself for your narrative. Do not copy the
> wording from the sample survey. Do not use
> verbiage from internet sites.
>
>
>
> Please stay in one verb tense throughout the
> narrative. Past tense usually works best and is
> mandatory in some surveys (Best Buy electronics,
> for example). You sometimes switched between past
> and present tense.
>
>
>
> If you have any questions regarding the
> information in this email or about other shop
> requirements, please contact your dispatcher at
> the BestMark offices.
>
>
>
> Thank you.
>
>
>
>
> Quality Editor
>
> BestMark, Inc.
>
>
> Never mind that I did a few other autoshops for
> Bestmark and received NO deductions. Again, I
> think the evaluator is the problem, although I
> could be wrong. Render your opinions.
D'Agosto
"What does it mean? You ask. I answer not/For meaning, but myself must echo, What?/And tell it as I saw it, on the spot."